Wednesday 21 October 2009

Pre 4 @ 6:15 - Stories

Check out some stories written by students in Pre 4.


Haunted museum
In a big museum, at 12.00 p.m, on Saturday, 23rd 1988, There were a security were killed someone, when he checked there. It was so scared. A lot of security were killed there, until now that news was hot. It was haunted museum/
There lived a men name “Jerry”. He has a best friend name “Tom”. They always be together. Some day, At 09.00 p.m, Jerry worked at the haunted museum to check in there. It was his first time to be Security. When he was going in there, there were something strange happened. He was so scared. All of his body was cold. When he go up to seconds floor, he heard something bark to his ears. All of the picture was moved. And then he went out from the museum quickly. He backed to the home.
Tomorrow morning, he called Tom to come to his house. He talked to him about somethings happened in the museum yesterday. Tom didn’t scared and he wanted to go to museum. At 10.00 p.m Tom and Jerry went to the haunted museum. All of them brought pistols and candles. When Tom went there, he felt scared. He walked with Jerry until the highest floor. It was sixth floor. Jerry could heard the barked clearly. They found some books that said if you could find 3 necklaces, you could opened the door that was locked. The necklace was pieces of heart.
After they solved it, the door opened, and Jerry heard a sound that said,” Come to me, help me !” and then there was a girl. She didn’t know her name and just said,” Get out from me!” And she became a demon. Tom and Jerry shot her, but It didn’t effect. Jerry took the book and said the spell to kill the Demon girl. When he said that, he took his leg, but he already said the spelled, so the demon girl Barked and died.
By Vincent and Hasan

Last holiday, Diandra, Allycia, Livia, and Fenny were given a task to observe the animals in the mountain. Livia and Fenny decided to observe mount Bromo, while Diandra and Allycia decided to observe mount Everest. Next day, Diandra and Allycia prepared their things and went to mount Everest as soon as possible.
On the second day, when they were hiking the mountain, suddenly there was a disaster. Very big disaster. They couldn’t see the road in front of them. They were panic. Suddenly, they found a cave and stayed there until the disaster ended. They made a fire with their matches. They tried to make a call to their family but there were no signal. Then they took a rest there for a night.
The next day, they tried to find their location using map and compass, but they couldn’t find it because they didn’t know where they were. But, from the compass, they knew that the way home was to South. Finally, they walked to the South through a small jungle. In the middle of the jungle, they saw 3 lions that were looking for food. They were very scared. First, they hid behind a tree. After the lions saw a deer, they ran to catch it. Diandra and Allycia felt very lucky. They continued their small journey to their home.
Finally, after walked all night to the South, they managed to find a big road. And they went home peacefully. After a week, the new school semester came. They completely forgot about their task. They knew that their teacher is really scary. When they were asked by their teacher to tell about their observation, they said “We saw a lion tried to catch a deer. The end”. And they got detention from their teacher.
By Febby and Nadia

Darren’s Death

Once upon a time, there was a rich family that lived in a very big mansion. They are Carrie, Xenia, Ian and Laura. They had a servant named Darren. He was really poor. One day, he fell in love with Carrie and so did Carrie. But Xenia, Ian and Laura didn’t want Carrie to be Darren’s wife. So, Carrie gave up. But, Darren didn’t. Then, Darren tried to kidnap Carrie. Then Ian found out that he wanted to kidnap Carrie.

Darren brought Carrie to Kelt and hid her in the storage room. He told her not to make some noise, so nobody knew that she was in the storage room. Xenia, Laura and Ian were worried about her. They tried to find Carrie, but they couldn’t find her, until Ian tired and took a break at Kelt.

Suddenly Ian heard Carrie’s phone ringing from the storage room. He tried to find where the sound came from, and he realized that it was came from the storage room. He pushed the door hardly, and the door was opened. Carrie cried and she told Ian about what Darren did. So Ian tried to find Darren. Luckily he found Darren in the cafĂ©, and Ian took a knife from his bag and stabbed it to Darren. Then Darren died with blood all over his body, Ian laughed loudly “MUAHAHAHAHA!!”

A police came, they caught Ian and throw Darren’s body in the street because the graveyard was full.
By Livia and Fenny

Noor’s Revenge

Once upon a time, there lived a girl named, Noor. She had a boyfriend named Tama. They lived very happy in an ordinary house. One day, Noor saw Tama with another girl. The girl was Noor’s best friend, Febby. Noor was very angry and ran away from their house. Then she ran to the road and when she was at the crossroad, a truck crashed her. Then, she had a very bad injury.
Someone helped her and carried her to the nearest hospital. Then when they arrived in the hospital, the nurse called Tama. Tama was eating when the phone rang. Then he answered the phone. Tama was very worried, and then he left Febby and went to the hospital. At the hospital, he went to Noor’s room and explain that there’s nothing happen between he and Febby. But unfortunately, Noor was already dead. So, Tama was talking with a corpse.
2 days after Noor died, Tama married with Febby. Noor knew about it and very angry. She backs to the earth and haunted Tama and Febby. At first Tama and Febby didn’t scare. But, because Noor haunted them everyday, Febby became scared and she left Tama.
After Febby left, Tama knew that the one that haunted them was Noor, then he gave Noor seven kind of flowers and say sorry to Noor. But, Noor didn’t care about it. Noor wanted Tama and Febby to follow her death. So, Tama went to Febby’s house and killed her.
After Febby died, Noor was very very very happy, but she still wanted to kill Tama. So, she changed herself to a very beautiful woman, and then she went to Tama’s house and she flirting with Tama. Then Tama accept it, and then when she cooked for Tama, she pours a lot of poison to Tama’s food.
An hour after it, Tama was eating his food. Suddenly, his face become pale, then he was nearly dead. Then at that time Noor said that she was NOOR and at that time, Tama died.
Noor laugh and laugh, then she choked because at that time she was eating meatball and she died for the second time.

The end

by Diandra and Allycia

Revenge

In the midnight Darren and Carrie drove a car to home,suddenly there was a girl in front of the car and they didn't see her so they crash the girl. When they heard the girl scream, they were going down from the car and looked near the girl. The Girl has already died.They were so shocked.Then Carrie said to Darren "lets burried her in the graveyard near here!!" .Darren said "don't want to go to the hell with you!!".Then Carrie said "Do you want to go to the jail right now?"."Of couse I don't want"Darren said. Then Carrie said "so lets do it now!!". When they came in the graveyard,they started to dig a hole but Darren fell off into the hole like there was someone pulled him. Carrie held Darren hand, so she fell into the hole too….
After they fell off, they looked at the gravestone, and ther was a sentence "R.I.P Darren & Carrie" They both screamed very loud………….
When they wanted to go out from the hole, they saw the girl who they crashed and the girl is smiling with many blood on her face. Then they screamed very loud then the girl killed them both…..
From that story, we have to be careful when we drive home.

by Vitta and Grace

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